Friday, April 11, 2014

narritive :)

Thoughts circling through my head. liquid oozing from my eyes. My heart felt like it had already stopped. Coming home from work i recived a jawbreaking text. My Mother was sufering from heart failer. She had been taking to the local hospital at 2:00. I chose his paragraph becasue its my introduction and i think it has a very effective hook.

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