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 What:we had to use an example of a limerick and make our own using the same rhyme and rhythm patterns.

So What:I learn't what a limerick is -A limerick is a

Assessment

Fwd: Forces movie

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Earthquake

Earthquake

Banging
Tumbling
Rumbling
Crashing
Screaming
Crumble
Crumble
Crumble
Goes the big shake

the lion

The Lion!!

He is a marathon runner,
competing in a race.

He is a spring,
pouncing towards his prey.

He is an axe,
mighty and strong.

He is a king,
sitting on his tree like throne.

He is an otter,
swimming in the fresh cool lake.

 by tenequa


Walt use metaphors in poetry 
Brainstorm a list of the attributes of your chosen animal.

the athletics poem

        The Athletics Sports

The athletic sports were usual enough;
it had,the long jump, the shot-put, the discus, the high jump
And even the ultra speedy sprints    
I competed in. My friends,my opponents and I did what girls do-cheered for others,leaped over the high jump bar,bounded into the long jump pit,hurled the shot-put into the air, spun the discus in the direction my other hand was pointing to,whizzed past everyone to try and win 1st place and toppled to the ground at the end.
Having lots of fun and enjoying ourselves.


WALT use poetic verse to recount a memory. 

So What:to use a poem about a country town and write our own poem about the athletics sports. To use adjectives,verbs,nouns and a conclusion.

Now What:To make my verb sentences shorter and more interesting by using a banish boring words booklet.