School Camps are a waste of time ? I am against!!!

Is it really worth the cost? Yes. School camps do cast alot of money. But you don't always have to pay the amount the fee says. You can fundraise !!! Going to Wellington for camp children from years 8 sell chocolate, children can sell as many boxes as they want. All the money goes towards the payment for the camp. So the more boxes you sell the less you pay!!! So there really is no down side for the payment. Either SELL OR PAY! :)

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